Unit 2 　Healthy eating 短文改錯中的“不一致”錯誤糾錯技巧 方法指導(dǎo) 在短文改錯中,“不一致”的錯誤主要包括以下幾種: 1)主謂不一致:采用“雙盯策略”,盯著主語看謂語,盯著謂語看主語,然后根據(jù)語境決定修改主語還是謂語。 2)時態(tài)不一致:根據(jù)上下文或時間狀語確定時態(tài)的選擇。 3)語態(tài)不一致:根據(jù)謂語動詞的特點和前后句式的使用特點確定語態(tài)的選擇。 4)名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)不一致:根據(jù)上下文和名詞本身的特點確定名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)形式。 5)代詞指代不一致:根據(jù)上下文或主語的特點確定代詞的使用。 6)搭配不一致:根據(jù)固定搭配或并列結(jié)構(gòu)等確定。 典例引領(lǐng) (2016四川) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。 修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞; 2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。 It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now. Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and moving. 方法運用 答案 It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now. Mom has a full-time job, ①sobut she has to do most of the ②houseworkshousework. She is a great mother. Both Dad ③orand I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We ④getgot up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went ⑤on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in ⑥herhis hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in⑦∧the kitchen. The dishes ⑧whatthat/which/what I cooked were Mom’s ⑨favoritestfavorite. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and ⑩movingmoved. 解析 ①考查并列連詞。兩個分句之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,并非因果關(guān)系,故用but。句意:媽媽有一份全職工作,但是她還得承擔大部分家務(wù)活兒。 ②考查名詞。housework家務(wù),為不可數(shù)名詞。 ③考查并列連詞。both...and...為固定搭配,意為“……和……都……”。 ④考查動詞時態(tài)。根據(jù)上下文以及in the morning可知本句是在敘述過去的事情,故用一般過去時。 ⑤考查固定搭配。句意:爸爸打掃完房子,然后就去購物了。go shopping去購物。 ⑥考查物主代詞。根據(jù)句中的he可知此處為his。 ⑦考查冠詞。此處特指家里的廚房,故在kitchen前加定冠詞the。 ⑧考查定語從句。先行詞為the dishes,且定語從句中cooked后缺少賓語,故用關(guān)系代詞that/which引導(dǎo)定語從句,因其在從句中作賓語,故也可以省略關(guān)系代詞。 ⑨考查名詞。favorite最喜歡的事物。 ⑩考查形容詞。此處作表語,主語為Mom,故用moved(感動的)。moving感人的;動人的。